Friday, May 18, 2012

The Right Idea

Our fearless leader wrote an Italian sonnet that I love. (She doesn't like to be called a teacher). Her name is Jane Underwood and she runs The Writing Salon where I take my class.

The Right Idea

When you have the right idea,
I say to myself, you'll know it.
Simple. So I drink tea and wait,
often for years, for that right idea.
It's such a relief when it finally
arrives (wearing sweats, out of the blue)
to tell me what I already knew.
(Sweats and an old shirt, so casually!)
I tend to expect more grandeur,
I suppose, from a right idea.
Not such a plain-clothed oracle.
But in one quick blink, no fanfare
The right idea can break thru rock, voila.
January, February, March. Then April.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Linda HI it's Jamie Lipps! Your email account is freezing me out, once again! And oh gosh did I ever have something important to say!

Kisses,
Jamie

P.S. I love that sonnet too

Linda Davick said...

Jamie. Are you writing something untoward? Ok, I just emailed you and maybe you can reply to that.

I know! I love these lines especially:

"It's such a relief when it finally
Arrives (wearing sweats, out of the blue)
To tell me what I already knew."

gina said...

Bellissima